When are you going to complete the story?

Um hi I have only discovered your story now (don't ask me why) and you have probably abandoned it already along with your account. I've read the first book but I don't think I will be reading this sequel bc I don't want to be disappointed. I know you've stopped updating. I just want you to know that you did a great job with Advocate. It's a shame you won't finish this but I don't blame you. It happens here in fictionpress. People just grow out of their own stories.

This is nice. I can't believe I only just discovered your stories.

Are you ever going to update?

ugg i was sooo frustrated when sarah said they shouldn't interfere i felt like jumping in your fic slapping her (even though i love her as a character) telling her screw it i'm interfering and running of to go warn the dragon king or something ...
now that i got that rant out of my system. finally we can see proper development between sasel and lith yay sooo cute hehe oh and i was like yea you go sasel when she interfered i felt soo happy proud and other good emotions

:( i cryed soo much in this chapter you did the emotional ling very well i loved it . i f a story can make me cry then i know its a good story thank you for writing this.

i want a boyfriend who will be with me like that i'm getting all teary i loved the fluf its not overly fluffy and thats why i like it :) also glad for sasel and lith progress

heheheh i loved it i actually knew what she was going to do when lith didn't stop talking my exact reaction was "i think i know what she's going to do...wait dont!... hahahahaha...dont do it... hahahhahah...she going to do it...hehehehe ...awwwwww cute i knew she was going to do it...hahahhahha"

and that was my reaction a lot of laughing but i usually go into a strange giggle smile when something like that happens in a story i love it hehehhe

i wanted to review about something els in the story as well but that last but of juiciness just threw out any other thought i had oh well

Could you please continue the story, it's really good.

LOVE this chapter... particularly Sarah and Matt :) A good laugh with some adorable moments after. Beautiful.

You are so good at making jerks out of your characters... I applaud you at that haha. (ie: Salel)

why arent you finishing the book?1

ah! finally we get to see lith's strength as a white dagon! i'm excited! D btw, i kinda miss the romance between sarah and matt /

aw Davin's coming back to Daiya... well atleast for a little bit. thank you thank you thank you so much! Beileve it or not, i really missed him )

oh lord, looks like matt and sarah aren't off the hook yet! i rlly hope that no one important dies again, matt has lost wayy to many important people in his life. anyways, i'm excited to read the rest fo this story!