|Reviews for Why Kill or Be Killed|
| Ryosuke-Segami chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
I like this poem. It has a great idea in mind and invokes that idea into the reader. It is a bit hard to read at times, though.
I never favor the "line, space, line..." setup in poetry. A unique design can help with the flow and keep different ideas from overlapping and confusing the reader. Even in the most random of poems, a bit of organization never hurts.