|Reviews for too easily|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
This has an extraordinary flow to it. Last two lines, " because I fall in love too easily-and not hard enough", captures the ambiguity that you create with earlier lines. Elicits the emotion of the reader well as it is easy to identify with the feelings presented here.
| Daffodil Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Aww... for a boy you know. "and without one singleheart on her sleeve" That was probably my favorite group of lines in the entire poem. It was a lovely poem, on the whole.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
ohh loved -all- the lines. beautiful.
especially liked the author's note. if that makes sense ]
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
'too ugly-not-prettywithout eyelashes that curlon their ownand without one singleheart on her sleeve'that was beautiful. i love poems that are specifically dedicated to someone. makes me feel all warm inside from the love.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Wow this is good.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Aww.. cute but sad. I like it..
| Herminia chapter 1 . 12/17/2005