I can say only one thing and that is:I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!

I'm sad that it's complete, but the happy anding is amazing! I'm new here at fiction press, but I'm starting to love this place thanks to incredible stories like yours!

Keep writing, you're very good at it! ;)

Oh myyyyyy goodness! You just made me cry! Like they're so adorable oh my god! :) if this would have continued would they have eventually become parents?

I think the only negative comment I have for this chapter is the fact that you went back and forth with the POV. I was sO confused I didn't understand

This story is so damn cute. Roux and Lee are so perfect for each other! Aw, fluffiness! _ *flails*

I'm in love with how in love they are. Bravo! But... "Stop watching my ass and to make breakfast!"

Try getting rid the "to".

Aw, freakin' adorable! I love it. Lee and Roux are the epitome of cute. Much love and adoration.

Whats next, whats next.

I just want to extend my official notice of hate towards you because all of yoru stories are chockful of freaking goodness and I almost ended up crying with this one :L

god i loved it!

thanks so much

~ari

usually I don't like pure fluff much. But this was wonderfully done. there was no feeling of ennui while reading it. Each of the chapters were interesting, poignant & cute. I liked that it had p.o.v's of both lee & roux. you have created really adorable characters who your readers can fall in love with. congrats on a very well-written story.

Oh god.

This has to e the sweetest, cutest, fluffiest most bloody adorable story I have ever read.

Awesome story ]

Read this:

Lee steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- almost, mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank steps into our flat and makes a bee-line for the kitchen to pack away the groceries. He's kicking off his shoes as he goes, tossing his scarf in the general direction of one of the kitchen-stools but missing it by a mile. I can't help but grin in amusement as I walk behind him, picking up the trail of clothing, shoes and plastic bags he leaves in his wake. It's like this every day, and it initially it irritated the hell out of me but I've become so used to it after living with Lee for as long as I have that it doesn't phase me anymore. I'd almost go so far as to say that I like it- , mind you- as it reminds me of us, and that we're together. And that the situation doesn't look as though it's going to be changing any time soon, thank god.

You repeated this.

Freakin hilarious and adorable.

Super sweet story. I loved the mushines it had and loved the magnificent way you switch from one character to another. It was spectacular!

i loved the bit about the cooking! so real... they're such a cute couple, and i liked the simplicity of the story, it suited the characters down to a tee. well written definetly.

aw _