Reviews for Thoughts
Spellcrossed chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
This is a lovely poem, very meaningful.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
I can't even begin to tell you all the times I've sat crying in my closet.

Well done. Simple, but oh so powerful. This speaks for a lot of us.
ANLE chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Though I do love dreaming, I must say that the poem expresses perfectly how many people must feel... There are just those moments in life when we can not see up from down and we wonder why we thought up of unreachable dreams only for them to be shattered and for us to go through the agonizing feeling of defeat... but anyway, this poem has taken a heart.

Skittlez Writer.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
the last two lines were incredible, just like the rest of the poem. wodnerful job with this.
Syfy chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Wow! Love this poem, apart from the last line, but other than that, it's great!
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
I don't like that last line, it's so pessimistic. I mean without dreams my life just wouldn't be the same. Some dreams are comforting even though they can never come true.
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Your poem was very good!
ShadesofBlue69 chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
I love the 3rd stanza, you definatly created a beautiful picture with the words that express the feeling just .
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
The feeling of isolation and trapped-ness is very intense. Brilliant piece with well thought out imagery.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
this is gorgeous. i will try to add you to my faves but i think its full :(