Reviews for Alice and Dorothy
blackcat13sady chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
The title leads you to believe that this will be like something of a parody, but the words drown you in your sorrow and bring you to the sun. The title makes close to no sense(except to the people that know the anomaly that is you), yet it is strangely fitting. Wonderful!
blackday chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Good imagary (I'll join the crowd) but ti's just so SHORT! MORE! MORE!
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
great imagery.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
it has some really great images~ beautiful work!

keep writing!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
i like this :) interesting semantics. good work!