|Reviews for Embodied|
| Toastntea chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
This is brilliant, theres not much more I can say really
Think there might be a typo in this line though For ever inch crawl forward
| Grimmand Honninscrave chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Powerful, I like! Conveys a well used but not often heeded message. Many people are "perfect" yet marred by the fact it is like looking at a bunch of clones.
Good poem, Well writen, not much negative feedback i can give really.
Cheers, Grimmand Honninscrave