LMAO! i'll go lenn on his ass, thats hilarious. those two make me laugh :P

go kim!

I Loved it, however it does need a bata...BUT OMG LOVED IT. i just the girls. Kim and Lenn seem somewhat like me. odd. lol anyways yes love it hunnies. please update soon!

OMG OMG I just finished reading ur story. I started at 2 and it is 8 now. Please I love this story. It is quite possibly the best story i have ever read in my entire life. Please update as soon as you can, I need more. Love you guys forever. UPDATE!

well other then that you really need a beta reader, it was well done, but still needs some work, I love the points of view, keep up the good work

The writing in this story is elementary at best, non-existent at worst. Someone should tell this writer that the term "in which" should not be used every 5th or 6th sentence (not to mention she has yet to use it correctly). It's extremely difficult to follow the flow of the story because the writing is so haphazard. I suggest the writers take a writing class (and pass it) before attempting another story (or at least let their mothers proof-read it first).

ok, frist off I really like this story...two..HOW COULD KOICHI GET HIT BY THE CAR! poor Carla and Koichi..it's not fair

Your story is so addicting, please update soon!

still loving the story. can't wait for you to post another chapter. UPDATE SOON

Thanks for reviewing my story, I'll update soon. Your story has a very interesting start so far. Really swell job. Sorry that I couldn't review earlier coz I have a stupid pop up blocker...Good going!

Your story is really cool, with all the POVs and everything. It just needs a bit more editing.

Hey, I finally found your story. Can't wait tell you post the rest of it. Please update soon.

Angle

come on you just stop like that? UPDATE

update A.S.A.P.