Reviews for What I Need
astromantic spin chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
im going on a review frenzy on all your older stuff. this wasn't a crappy poem. unless there's a such thing as good crap. kidding. anyway, i liked it. however, maybe the first half of your poem doesn't make sense. actually, scratch that comment. but you do seem to repeat a few of the lines in random places which throws the flow of the poem off a bit.
shannaro chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
this wasn't crappy. it was a very nice poem. maybe the beginning needed some work though but oh well.. keep it up! i like to read stories better though since poems aren't my thing although destiny is forcing me to write a poem on something about her emotions since she can't think of anything but it's not like i want to feel what she is feeling and i know i'm just going on and on talking about nothing and i'll just shut up now. _