Reviews for Revisited: Dear God
tree plebian chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
I remember thinking exactly the same way when my brother disapeared and he came back and wow - i really relate. Not religious anymore though. Erm oh well. Good poem :!
Ryustorm chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Erm, its very sweet and the exact same thing happened to my friend, called abby. you are religious i presume? i'm not sure how i should review it. as a piece of poetry? well its not bad. but then again, i'm not very good at critising poetry, i mean everyone intends different effects. it was very clear and honest and nice in that . good work and conintue to speak from the heart.