Hi, I just read your first chapter and loved it! I really love the idea of scientific experiments gone wrong! I was never one for SciFi but this rocks! I really like your Angel/Devil character. She's really funny with her sarcastic comments and witty way of talking! And, especially the way she used the mind thing to freeze the doctor, and he immediately knew who she was "Ah, ans you must be Angel." "Sometimes." Seriously and literally I 'lol'ed there even though people generally don't unless there is someone to hear them. That's a true fact! xD Anyway, loved the chapter and I'm gonna take a look at the 2nd chapter to! Your title is really great and made me very interested. I can never seem to think of good titles. If you get the chance, would you check out my story? Its called Sea of Vengeance and I'm relatively new to the site. Thanx for the awesome story and keep up the great work! Happy writing!

kcfrid

loved it! continue soon.. :)

Continue soon.. :)

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