Reviews for blurred
katt's got your tongue chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
beautiful, brilliant poem! i loved the summary. the last lines give suspense. truly a wonderful piece of work. bravo bravo!

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
i love this its so sad and beautifully written.. the ending especially and the reminiscent tone is awesome... great job
in theory chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Been awhile! This is so graceful, but completely riddled with enigmatic sarcasm. Captivating. Shalom x
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Beautiful. Deep. More than just pretty words.

Keep writing.
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
this is pretty good. love the ending. sad and touching. thanx for ur reviews btw, did u get my email? oh well, gtg, brilliant work as always!

poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
beautiful poem. simply, one of a kind.

~* noelle
forgottenxxfreak chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Very different, I've haven't read much like it! I like it, very nice :)
RunningTimeByLight chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
so amazing...awesome piece of writing!
Decollage chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Wow. Very sad, very impressive. I'm not even sure what to say, I can't put words to it. Touching, meaningful. Deep.

dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
The entire poem is worthwhile, but the last stanza.. that, my friend, is triumphant.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Wow, so full of emotion, great style of writing. What a tragic story.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
this is gorgeous. a really inspiring piece of work. *added to faves*