Reviews for connection
Jacqueline Stem chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I love the line "An unspoken connection between these two objects". Very cool. JS
classic violet chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
"This unspoken connection wasn’t there at all"

That line was so good. As is this poem.
Briar's Thorn chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
i have to dissagree with that one because belive you me it happened, and oddly enough it was when he was playing the guitar for me...any who...very well written the only line that didn't seem to fit was 'they never are therethey're just make believe' it dosn't flow with the poem but other than that nice jog! keep up the good work!

sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
pretty and sad.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
This is very sad and unpredictable. I thought at first that it was a hopeful poem until it came to the ending. BOOM. Shocker. Anyways, I love the approach.
hey maria chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
"Look, mummy, there's an airplane up in the sky!" - Pink Floyd.

Your pen-name made me think of that.

I like your poem, by the way. It was lovely.