Reviews for slithering slime
Blood Sinister chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Made my blood run cold.

Last few lines kind of pinned me, made me shiver with the injustice.

The way you coupled monsters and... that thing was perfect, and the way it linked,flowed,moved was just so right. And stuff.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Lovely poem, like the whole ethereal feel to it. Kind of bittersweet, well done x
mezzie chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
this one hits in the face with no excuses (that's a good thing to me). direct and shiveryscary and words are hurt.

mezzie
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I like this. A lot. Great job.
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
so beautiful in a bloody moonlightsonata sort of way.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
This is an extraordinary use of word choice and placement. The images presented show true emotion well. This is a unique and powerful work.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
heartaching.
i call it laughable chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
holy wow. unbelievable. what a heart wrenching piece. that was one powerful read, and totally unexpected. definitely going on my favorites!
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
')oh.r .i .g .h .t. : you were accusing me of infidelity('ack. that really hurt. a really powerful line. this was wonderful, the emotion in it made me shivver. great.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
oh christ thats powerful. so bitter and cold and empty, this tells so much in so little words. and "so where were you when the slithering slime

slipped under my windowsill and pried open

my thighs with its slippery, scissor-shaped teeth?

" is just p-e-r-f-e-c-t-i-o-n. god, it makes me grimace to read it
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
i like how it all comes together in the end because i was expecting something different.
multiples of six chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
I love this. It was intense, especially the last line.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
I love the irony and sarcastic, coupled with the pain. Makes it powerful.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
wow, I LOVE the way this is written. Very good work, loved it.
addie pray chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Gorgeous wording in this. Images were lovely as well.