i love your concepts... they are inspiring and intriguing and refreshing and... just goodness all over.

mezzie

inspiring.

gorgeous, as usual. everything is just so breathtakingly beautiful even when you're talking about and crash...is it as opposed to crash and burn, haha.i love this.

lovelovelove this, as always. you have such talent - i feel guilty that i haven't reviewed in a while, i've just gotten lazy i guess. brilliant work, i especially loved the first sentence. fucking amazing, as always.

'i still love the word darling.'

Me too! :)

interesting format/good poem.

i almost expect to take the first letter of each word to read out a message of some sort. interesting.

strangely beautiful. i can't quite say why.

"i) Darling burned and he ate her up." fucking wow. that was what caught me.

i love the word "darling" too. my favorite gbye phrase? "'night, dahlin'" hah.

your imagery is (so very nadly, deeply) love all wrapped into one. I love it. again, you make beauty out of anything.

I adore darling now.

~* noelle

darling...yup it is a strangely good word. i like it, i love the i) darling burned and he ate her up. so odd and cyrptic, but it works so well.

I wouldn't say it's not working. It feels unfinished, maybe, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, and I like the feel of it.

And, for the record, 'darling' really is such a lovelyironic word.

love it. only need two words...normally my reviews are pretty long. good job.

aww, what astonishingly beautiful imagery! it sticks in your mind and sparkles. lovely.

i loved this, it's working. : ) i love the word darling as well, it's used in wayy too many of my poems i think.

Love the imagery and style. Always.

'solar waste' is lovely.