Reviews for and she |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love your concepts... they are inspiring and intriguing and refreshing and... just goodness all over. mezzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() inspiring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gorgeous, as usual. everything is just so breathtakingly beautiful even when you're talking about and crash...is it as opposed to crash and burn, haha.i love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovelovelove this, as always. you have such talent - i feel guilty that i haven't reviewed in a while, i've just gotten lazy i guess. brilliant work, i especially loved the first sentence. fucking amazing, as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'i still love the word darling.' Me too! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting format/good poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i almost expect to take the first letter of each word to read out a message of some sort. interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() strangely beautiful. i can't quite say why. "i) Darling burned and he ate her up." fucking wow. that was what caught me. i love the word "darling" too. my favorite gbye phrase? "'night, dahlin'" hah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your imagery is (so very nadly, deeply) love all wrapped into one. I love it. again, you make beauty out of anything. I adore darling now. ~* noelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() darling...yup it is a strangely good word. i like it, i love the i) darling burned and he ate her up. so odd and cyrptic, but it works so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't say it's not working. It feels unfinished, maybe, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, and I like the feel of it. And, for the record, 'darling' really is such a lovelyironic word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it. only need two words...normally my reviews are pretty long. good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, what astonishingly beautiful imagery! it sticks in your mind and sparkles. lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this, it's working. : ) i love the word darling as well, it's used in wayy too many of my poems i think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the imagery and style. Always. 'solar waste' is lovely. |