Reviews for Pain
fall3nang3l chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Loved it. It was totally me!

Keep writing!
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Wow... this has so much emotion. well written! "hurt and sorrow engraved on my face' I love the use of engraved there!
blatant-sneak chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
a bit cliche, but i liked the "desperation, an obedient dog" part
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
very descriptive and portrays the emotion well. Takes the abstract "PAIN" and makes it concrete with the barrage of images. Well done.
Bitch Du Jour chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Oh my goodness! You put into words exactly how I've felt dozens of times. Bravo! Seems we've got a similar writing style, as well. _~
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
the emotions you've evoked were just beautiful.