Reviews for five months go by and it still feels the same
Crystal Carson chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
aw I LOVE this poem

and as you said in the review you left me [which by the way, thank you :)]- I definitely know the feeling that's going through this poem

really great job
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
you did a great job with this, like always. : )
Tikklz chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Another great piece! You explained very well how it feels to be getting over a relationship. I've gone through the same scenario (am I right that he cheated on you?) and this conveys that feeling perfectly. You're my new fav author!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Excellent the way this twists, repeats and runs through its short breaks. The internal dialogue works well here as it adds to the interaction of the participants.