|Reviews for Will|
| Heather chapter 22 . 1/8/2010
I'm not sure if you finished the story, so are you going to continue to pursue it...cuz Jackie seems...off
| layne chapter 22 . 10/14/2008
shitty ending to a somewhat patchy, stoic story. there was little life and feeling in this, and it was a bit abrupt and flippant.
| RoxxorzBoxxerz chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
I thought Jackie is a wanker, for blow'n Will off(not in the good way) on his b-day. But then again Will is a whore XD loved it!
| gummybaby chapter 22 . 1/8/2008
I never know what to say when I finish reading a complete story...the fact that someone can just create something out of thin air and have it affect my life and and stuff, it's really mind boggling. Your story was amazing, and I'll definetly remember it for a long time. Thanks.
| mia5081 chapter 22 . 7/13/2007
I loved the story ) but I am wondering if Will will (hehe Will will) stay with Jackie or not
| arcapellago chapter 22 . 6/13/2007
I really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope one day you will be able to finish it. Right now seems to be a good end, but a part of me must know what could happen next.I liked you story line a lot. And how Will seems like a real person...I so want to know about his past though.
| Kizuna chapter 22 . 3/23/2007
This was a very good story!_ I love Will!_ Jackie not so much though... I think he's an ass... But I see there's another story where Will's the main person!_~ Maybe he'll find someone better there!_ I hope so! I'm gonna read it ASAP!_ Very good job!_
| Undecided Fiction chapter 22 . 1/23/2007
Wow, this was a great read. Will was so sadly...needy. And the foster parents were awesome. All your characters were well-written and this story has an intelligent way about it that makes me envious. Faving, and I'm checking out more of your works.
| Niousha XD chapter 17 . 1/7/2007
wow. great story. I love how all your characters are somewhat flawed. It makes them so much more...human, or something.
| jma chapter 22 . 8/11/2006
Awesome story. But then so is every story you take the time to write. Very realistic. The character's lives are not so perfect and pretty as every other author portrays their characters to be. _ In short- you do a damn good job of 'keeping it real'. Keep up the good work!
| theremaybeagodyahoo.com chapter 22 . 3/7/2006
just wanted to let you know that your (fairly) silent stalker still loves reading and admiring your work.
| lazy infection chapter 22 . 3/4/2006
Hi, I reviewed before, but I had forgotten my password, so I had to review anonymously as Vickie. But I rememebered it, so now I signed in. This story is awesome and is most definately going on my favs list! Keep pu the great writing!
| LooseNativeMoose chapter 22 . 3/1/2006
| afk chapter 22 . 2/24/2006
but but there will be soemthing else right? anotehr story right? you can't leave e like this!"! argh will T_T
| cursive love chapter 22 . 2/24/2006
Jackie makes me extremely anxious for Will's safety.