Reviews for Porn and Platypi
Written chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
i just read this poem over about ten times. it's amazing. readable and universal and just... IT TOUCHES ME. which sounds weird and awkward, but you know what i mean.
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Pulls at a string somewhere.

Pione chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Really nice! I'm a big fan of yours! :)
thegirlisgonenow chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
I like this poem a lot.

"Did you know that the male platypus is venomous?

His voice comes through, quiet, revealing an obvious I love you."

Those are the moments. Nice job capturing that feeling of freinds-we're friends-I love you.
insilenceandsong chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
I've read this poem probably five times before now, but this is the first time I've actually thought to review it. You're an amazing writer-it's easy to feel the emotion in your pieces. I love that this poem seems so real, like you were able to take the precise flow of the characters' thoughts and put them on paper.
ceralyn chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
I found this piece pretty hilarious, especially the talk of writing a dirty romance novel. Lovely, I liked it.
feelingshortofstable chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
Okay. Wow. There was something really amazing about this piece, and honestly, I couldn't help smiling. Hell, I'm still smiling. And I wasn't happy before I read this. Great job.