Reviews for if only it could have been that simple
realityescapesher chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
whoa. this seems like a really intense situation. i love the lines "and I may be a bitch but I'm thinking/'what? did you meet him at the funeral?'" and "if only it could have been that simple".

-aly
Tikklz chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
wow, I didn't understand the title until I went back and looked at what I had said as a comment on "five months". I'm so sorry for you, first of all. Yeah, it definitely WASN'T that simple. I completely love this poem. I love how it pieces together with the others to tell a story. Amazing.
Heather Harper chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
wow... that blew me away... i luv the way u decided to take advantage of parentheses, the poem would not be the same without it *adds to favorites*
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
well, i'm confused, & i'm too ADD to stick with it, but i liked it. you did a wonderful job writing this, one of your best.
Neteri Bennu chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Not bad i like it ...

Keep it up

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