Reviews for Labor Pains Means I'm On Top
No Name 7429035 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Wow, another one I like. I'd bitch slap someone if they tried to manipulate me that way, can't kill a baby with a slap to the face for the mommy I'm sure. I'm all for it's their choice though, I prefer they choose to keep it and if they don't want it, adoption, but I ultimately, it's their decision and none of my business.

This was well written, I like your usage of words. XD
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
everyone's so split up by the pro-choice pro-life thing. i am pro-choice. abortion is wrong when it is used to manipulate someone though.
Sally Can Wait chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Amazing. :D The last line was absolutely perfect.

-Sally Can Wait
tearitrightup chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
your best poem so far
Written chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
this reads so musical. . . it's lovely and very sad.

Strangely enough my mother and I, yes, it's weird, were discussing a situation like this.
theory of black chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
It is a sick, sick world.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
so cruel, twisting and deceitful; everything seems like a lie after reading this.

~* noelle
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
very interesting point of view. i never thought of women keeping a men with a baby. the first lines kill. i love the placements of the (shh, shh).
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
incredible. i really enjoyed this. i loved the contrast between the first & second verse.
hey maria chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
This flows like a song. It's gorgeous.