|Reviews for Scared of the dark|
| Evul Buddha chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
I like the imagery in this poem is very good and well written, the line "But the dark is just the day with the lights switched off" just kinda brings the whole poem to a great ending, keep up the good work
| HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Very good write. I think everyone can relate to this one ;)God Bless,HoldinOn2Him
| eternal symphony chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
this is nice. its like everykids problem with the dark. Im still like that some nights depends on my day before:)
| FeralShadowwolf chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I honestly believe this is your best piece. I really loved the flow of it and the rhyming worked really well. I hope there are more pieces like this to come. Wonderfully done!
| gopie chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
First of all, thank you for the nice review for 'Inspire Me...'.
Anyway, this poem. Phwoarh, that was good. I really did feel it. I like the third last line best - that one really emphasized the initial feeling, and the casualness ( and then some) of the concluding lines were unexpected and great.
| RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
for a first it isn't bad... a bit choppy. but I liked it.
| amavian chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
I like how this flows and evolves. Its not your typical afraid of the dark poem, it feels like it has more substance.