|Reviews for Phoenix|
| elegiac lies chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
i like the way that it keeps a bit of mystery...and the way the language is very straightforward ("i have risen") yet simultaneously full of !
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
nice metaphor. i like the feeling you get from this poem...it's hard to describe tho.
| in theory chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Very pretty, and inspirational too. Thankyou for your comments :)
| With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Interesting, but almost pointless. You could have said a lot more about the phoenix-it's such a great topic. Try reading "News of the Phoenix" by A.J.M. Smith to see what I mean.
| Diane Lynn chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
That was lovely...Said simply, with few words, yet you say so much. This must impact everyone...