Reviews for Sway |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This poem is so easily relatable to. I love the way you wrote it too. It flows perfectly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the title is perfect. i dont know. it fits so well, not to mention it's catching. i loved the first lines: "I think i might be/ flirting with you;/ laughing a little,/ or perhaps not enough." hahaha. pretty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is written so fast and spontaneously, I can practically see the thoughts in your head. Very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Ahh...yes. I remember the woes of stuff like that. Either way, it was a lovely piece. It hardly flowed and obviously didn't rhyme, but it had it's own scheme. I like it. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good. I really like the phrase "Didn’t you see thatmy nails dug into my palmsas if to say‘I’m sorry’?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() It interests me that the person behind this is almost swaying (hence the title eh!) in and out of confusion and cant make up their mind! great work |