Reviews for Sway
amanda.h chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Wow. This poem is so easily relatable to. I love the way you wrote it too. It flows perfectly.
i call it laughable chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
the title is perfect. i dont know. it fits so well, not to mention it's catching.

i loved the first lines:

"I think i might be/ flirting with you;/ laughing a little,/ or perhaps not enough." hahaha. pretty.
Jen calculates chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
This is written so fast and spontaneously, I can practically see the thoughts in your head. Very nicely done.
Procrastinating Fairy chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
...Ahh...yes. I remember the woes of stuff like that.

Either way, it was a lovely piece. It hardly flowed and obviously didn't rhyme, but it had it's own scheme. I like it. _
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
This is good. I really like the phrase "Didn’t you see thatmy nails dug into my palmsas if to say‘I’m sorry’?"
button-nose chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
It interests me that the person behind this is almost swaying (hence the title eh!) in and out of confusion and cant make up their mind! great work