Reviews for Fallen over blue
Evul Buddha chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
I really like this one the way that poem flows through and makes me see what you are feeling, its really well writen keep it up,

p.s thanks for adding me to ur favourites
classic violet chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Vivid imagery. Amazing job! Love the title, btw.
mamayana chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
wOw. It just hits me right here! (thumps heart). I love poems like these, even though they are sad. Makes me think of my own experiences. Hay, life.

Mamayana
RobWho2 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
I like this- the rhythms maybe not perfect but I love the words.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
(I just realized there's only one day difference between this one and the first...) I like this one a lot. It's got cheeky feel about the rhyme, and it isn't choppy at all... nice.

thanks for your review
MakatoMai chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Blinks This ones a little confusing to me... But it still sounds good, especially the beginning...it makes me think...

MakatoMai
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Aw I like this one especially the ending. The 'fallen over blue' works so well. Nice job!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
i love the rhyming scheme and the last line. nice work! :D
xoxkissxofxdeathxox chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Great this rhyming pattern worked out well for you! I love the way you ended it...Oh and in the forth line, id 'cause supposed to be misspelled? I didn't get that...Anyway..
L0st.S0uL chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
wow i love it it kind of describes how i feel rite not ... 1 of my faavorites