Reviews for Mystics And Fools
felicia13 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Cool. I really like the truth the hangs over this poem like a fun little veil. It's good. Truth fun inspirations.

Felicia.
Dawn's-End chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
I think the last line should be "Are mystics and fools" to be gramatically correct. But I like the idea behind the jorio. It's sort of weird to have a poem who's structure is based on the number of words instead of the number of syllables. Words are actually pretty arbitrary denominations in poetry.

I'm not usually a fan of really short poems, and I usually prefer good rhyming poetry over everything else, but I still like this. I can certainly appreciate the difficulty of creating your own form.