Reviews for Heartbreak
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Sad but so true...
LostInLalaLand chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Another prize review:

This whole idea of a reverse haiku just blows my mind. I'm obviously easily amused, but that's really cool. Did you make that up? Wow...

You really are so talented. I admire how much emotion you can put into (counts on fingers) nineteen syllables.

One thing... I THINK that every is only two syllables, so the first line only six. I would check that.

Keep Writing!

HIme1221 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Amazing how so few words can describe such anguish, inescapable pain that consumes you. I like!

Needa S chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Love can be harsh until you find your special someone. Awesome write.
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Aw, this is beautiful!**Emi
Alysia Leak chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
I think this is a great thought and reverse Haiku. I could be wrong but I think in order for it to be a haiku, it has to relate to nature. Still, great write.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Hell i agree with this...every time it DOES get harder and it does hurt more...well done!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I feel like I want to answer that...but I won't. nicely done
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 1/12/2006 cool, but all too true...
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
no i just despise any form of punk rock
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/8/2006

Red rose,—soft petals,—

Cling clear dewdrops through night's length,—

Fleeing pink dawn's sun.


Gently sings moon's breath,

Nightingale regaling death,

Red heart plundereth.


Each pink bloom in Spring,

Knows only pure love of Rain,

'Til Sun,—petals wilts.


I have heard it said,

Heart recovers when it breaks,—

Porcelain some though.


Such an illusion,—

¿Where's the master magician?

That can love sustain.


All Time's cracks and stains,—

Eyes of Love repair and glue,—

Moon beams caressing.

p.s. Happy 2006! Back home for a while. Thx for reviews, m.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I really like this! It's really cool, and I like how its a reverse.

Just FYI - I know I haven't reviewed in a LONG time, but I've read your stuff and tried to review, but my computer hasn't let me! Ah! So after like 30 minutes of trying, I got one review box. I'll try to review some more, but it depends on if my computer will let me!

Love your other poems too, in case I don't get a chance to properly review them for a while...

Joey7691 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
A very good question i ask, myself.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Interesting! _ Nice haiku, write on darl!

Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
True enough...
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