Reviews for Heartbreak
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Sad but so true...
LostInLalaLand chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Another prize review:

This whole idea of a reverse haiku just blows my mind. I'm obviously easily amused, but that's really cool. Did you make that up? Wow...

You really are so talented. I admire how much emotion you can put into (counts on fingers) nineteen syllables.

One thing... I THINK that every is only two syllables, so the first line only six. I would check that.

Keep Writing!

LostInLalaLand
HIme1221 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Amazing how so few words can describe such anguish, inescapable pain that consumes you. I like!

X-hime1221
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Love can be harsh until you find your special someone. Awesome write.
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Aw, this is beautiful!**Emi
Alysia Leak chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
I think this is a great thought and reverse Haiku. I could be wrong but I think in order for it to be a haiku, it has to relate to nature. Still, great write.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Hell i agree with this...every time it DOES get harder and it does hurt more...well done!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
I feel like I want to answer that...but I won't. nicely done
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Reverse...how cool, but all too true...
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
no i just despise any form of punk rock
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
(5-7-5)

Red rose,—soft petals,—

Cling clear dewdrops through night's length,—

Fleeing pink dawn's sun.

(5-7-5)

Gently sings moon's breath,

Nightingale regaling death,

Red heart plundereth.

(5-7-5)

Each pink bloom in Spring,

Knows only pure love of Rain,

'Til Sun,—petals wilts.

(5-7-5)

I have heard it said,

Heart recovers when it breaks,—

Porcelain some though.

(5-7-5)

Such an illusion,—

¿Where's the master magician?

That can love sustain.

(5-7-5)

All Time's cracks and stains,—

Eyes of Love repair and glue,—

Moon beams caressing.

p.s. Happy 2006! Back home for a while. Thx for reviews, m.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I really like this! It's really cool, and I like how its a reverse.

Just FYI - I know I haven't reviewed in a LONG time, but I've read your stuff and tried to review, but my computer hasn't let me! Ah! So after like 30 minutes of trying, I got one review box. I'll try to review some more, but it depends on if my computer will let me!

Love your other poems too, in case I don't get a chance to properly review them for a while...

Elli
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
A very good question i ask, myself.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Interesting! _ Nice haiku, write on darl!

~Anna~
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
True enough...
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