Reviews for Weakness
EmoEmilee chapter 16 . 7/8/2016
I have a dream that one day this story will be finished
FamishedNight chapter 16 . 1/14/2012
Awesome story! Update soon!
merrymowmow chapter 15 . 1/8/2009
I was wondering when you're going to update?
merrymowmow chapter 14 . 9/13/2008
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Lovedward48 chapter 14 . 5/18/2008
YAY! You updated again! I love it! But It's still hard to tell from whose POV it is...

Ahm, Sorry? I don't know who this mystery man is. -_-"

What is Mefalla doing in that car? I hope she'll survive. But more importantly where is Cadi? I miss him! XD

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Lovedward48 chapter 13 . 3/23/2008
Wow! I love it! But could you please give a clue as to when the POV switches. I never know which POV it's in until I read about half way through! XD It's really confusing...(or am I just too dumb XD )

Back to topic: I like Dawn/Trevor! He's funny! Oh, I've waited for him and Ferris to meet! INSANITY! XD

I don't like Gus and I don't like the fact that Jean told him EVERYTHING! I hope he dies soon!

I don't like Hook either! Nobody can be stronger than Cadi! That'd be awful! Cadi is the hero, he HAS to be the strongest! I hope he kills Hook slowly and painfully! Let him suffer! Muahahahahahha XD

I'm waiting for the chapter in wich Cabi and Jean finally get back together! Please write fast, this story is awesome and I love it so much! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I absolutely can't wait for the next it!
merrymowmow chapter 12 . 6/30/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
DJ chapter 12 . 4/18/2007
take em wherever you see fit_~ i know youll do them justice.

Alex: umm...will i still get some?

i dunno...up to her.

jean is molested by a girl? poor hope to see more. wheres cadi? wheres brent? when will he save her? whos larry? am i the only one who thinks martha stewart is evil?
merrymowmow chapter 11 . 1/28/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update.
DJ chapter 11 . 12/25/2006
well there damn well better be more after it! you cant just leave us hanging like that and...

Eric: ahem?


Eric: your last update was when?

okay...well i have the chapter written but i dont have any way to get it from one computer to the other...need memory stick.

loved it! uh oh...whatll cadi do when he sees her arms though? and what the hell DID yo do to her?
merrymowmow chapter 10 . 12/9/2006
I was wondering when you're going to update.
DJ chapter 10 . 10/21/2006
Cadi: *grips wheel as car jerks* dude? what was that?

LOL! someone has a crush on jean!

Alex: *dreamy look* yeahh...

i meant someone not crazy, hes in charge of the crazies. okay, the hell is up with her? wheres the baby? O! will he grow up and be a deranged phycho like his dad?

Cadi: *winds window down* keep it up and youll see how deranged i fucking am!

do i get to sit on your lap then?

Cadi: you are sick you know that!

*everyone stares at Cadi* *crickets chirp*

i am?
DJ chapter 8 . 6/18/2006
meh, i have no writters block, i have a one month old baby to help out with, and a kitten on the way.

Alex: you realize how that sounded?


Eric: no no no, that is NOT how you kidnap someone. let me show you...phenet can you be the example?

Phenet: i just late for...something...

Tran: what are you talking about?

Phenet: SHUT IT!

Alex: i can interogate him...mentally...

Phenet: NO!
Pixie-Twix chapter 7 . 4/6/2006
Alex: oh...i cant pass up an oppertunity like this...does cadi wadi have a wittle baby waby?

Cadi: quit it.

Alex: the wittle phycho getting mad?

Cadi: i mean it...i have a glare and i know how to use it.

Alex: yeah...i have telepathic hands...ya aint gt nothing on me!

Cadi: i have a baby boy.

Alex: THAT LITTLE SHIT JUST BARFED ON ME!but hes so cute...

Cadi: dont make me start it up again, cause i will.

nice ta have ya back my on line sis_ hopefully i will be able to post soon too, as soon as this writters block goes away.

Eric: oh sure, get writters block when i have angel alone and naked on my bed.

Alex: welcome to my world...
gemini-6989 chapter 7 . 4/4/2006
i've had this story on my favorite's list so i check it everday for updates and when i saw there was a new chapter, i was like "HOLY SHIT!". i honestly thought you forgot about this story; but you DIDN'T XD. i liked this chapter a lot; ecspecially cadi's emotions about brent. p.s. brent is the perfect name for their kid
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