|Reviews for MulitColored Spring|
| Bonfire Of The Sanities chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Very interesting...I like it
| Glittering Innocence chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
That was very descriptive and lovely
| Shining Innocence chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Hi, RI! It's SI! Can you put me on your favorites list? I put you on mine! Heres about the poem:
The three stanzaed paragraphs didnt really sound right... other than that, it was GREAT!
1st paragraph is about the great things that happen when spring comes
2nd paragraph is about even though hate and sadness are strong, dont let them ruin your life
3rd paragraph is about your memories and how you want to keep them and have lots of good ones
4th paragraph is about happiness
5th paragraph is about savoring your time with everyone you love and not to take anything for granted
I hope I got it right!
I wish you good luck in writing!