|Reviews for coffee kisses|
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 13 . 6/2/2008
So this is a review for all of the haikus.
I found them again very entertaining. (I must say for a girl who talks to herself in the library, you are getting some advertising for free)
I loved the Murdering soldier, mirror, and the vampire one the most, but again all very unique and thought out.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 7 . 4/22/2006
wow, i really like the "we could leave it all" although in real life, it isnt just as easy as that...very good job...
| simpleplan13 chapter 13 . 1/21/2006
powerful... reminds me of a old black and white movie.. well done
| simpleplan13 chapter 12 . 1/21/2006
i liek this... reminds me of school
| simpleplan13 chapter 11 . 1/21/2006
interesting... i like it
| simpleplan13 chapter 10 . 1/21/2006
very cool.. i really love that first stanza
| simpleplan13 chapter 9 . 1/21/2006
im not getting the last line... but i love those first two
| simpleplan13 chapter 7 . 1/21/2006
i love those last two lines
| simpleplan13 chapter 6 . 1/21/2006
interesting last line... i like it
| simpleplan13 chapter 5 . 1/21/2006
o i like this
| simpleplan13 chapter 4 . 1/21/2006
sad last stanza.. great poem
| simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 1/21/2006
o i love that last line
| simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 1/21/2006
wow.. powerful and beautifully written
| citrus scented chapter 13 . 1/20/2006
so angry,. and the bold type really adds to that supremely. great stuff; a wonderful collection of dazzerling talent. enjoyed it imensely
| citrus scented chapter 12 . 1/20/2006
schoolroom laughter full of dirtyellow headache-lights...how do you do it? so true and relatable...just amazing. your right once you start writing hiaku's you cant stop.