|Reviews for how high?|
| Utada Rumiko chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
"How high we could fly without wings?"
I absolutely love that line and this poem as a whole. Really got me thinking actually. Especially that line. Good job and thanks again for the review.
| Decollage chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I like it. Especially the description.. Armor, mugful of tears, that's genius material.
I only have one suggestion, in terms of word use. The line above the last, 'you catched me'. I'm not sure if that's intentional, but it would sound better in the correct tense. 'Caught'. It just... sticks out like a pin, jabs at my eyes.
Good vocabulary use, though, and wonderful formatting. The format brings it all together, in a way.