|Reviews for struckdumbsmiling|
| crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
oh prettypretty. i love this.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Sleeping beauty, sleeping beauty, let down your hair. (I have my fairy tales mixed up.) This is more vivid and more horrifying than warped Disney on Technicolor on acid.
That made sense in my head, I swear it did.
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
oh my goodness...i just keep reading it over. really, really great.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
i loved this. gave me a chill, it was that incredible.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Beautiful and tinged with dark&morbid beauty. 'rigor mortis' - Gorgeous, I love the usage of it. Any necro would love this poem (that's meant to be a compliment, a strange one, but a compliment nevertheless). And the ending is flawless. Something about it, though, makes me think of a zombie. However, I know what you meant by the ending. (I'm just weird.)
| sundaynightsky chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
gorgeous work. beautiful imagery.
| button-nose chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Short but sweet….very cute! Fab work…keep it coming
Button nose x x