Reviews for Right Here In My Arms FINISHED
Splutter chapter 13 . 5/31/2008
i can see your writing improving with every chapter.

well done!
kurskis chapter 17 . 5/18/2008
Trent is so cute!
the-galaxy chapter 2 . 5/17/2008
hmm.. well, one thing that wasn't very realistic was when he drank the perfume. Considering the amount of chemicals there are in scented products, just taking a small sip could either get you really sick or sent to the hospital to get your stomach pumped. And since Trent nearly "chugged" half of the bottle, he most likely would've died from it.
IljimaE chapter 29 . 4/28/2008
Hey! I was almost surprised on the big changes in the way of writing...I mean these past chaptersbecame more normal...

I hate it so much when the whole chapter goes like "I like puppies" and they argue ...

well i just really want to compliment how great the story became...

and it's so amusing how I can't guess who ends up to who...
ixxdbest chapter 21 . 4/27/2008
the story is really very very very boring that I don't like it but can't help stop reading cuz I hate to cut in the middle not knowing the ending...anyway is the author a filipino cuz the name of Trent's parents is exactly the name of a famous politician-actress couple...is that just coicidence?
coffee shoppe chapter 19 . 4/12/2008
Trent and Raina needss to stay together. I love them! I love your story too.
coffee shoppe chapter 15 . 4/12/2008
Whats funny is that MY History teacher is named Ms. Roberts.
luv rhima fan chapter 15 . 4/8/2008
heya i luv ur book so much that u hav 2 publish it and i also wanted 2 say dat dis is my second time readin it cause its got me so hooked dat i cant stop thinkin bout it and i swear i will sue u if u make tris and raina date in da second 1 cause i mean if i had meet trent i would so drool over him
pretitiful chapter 32 . 3/28/2008
wow!

i finished. and i must say great story. but i sort of wanted her to get with travis. but also with trent. it's just hard to make a choice because one of them will get hurt. and that is sad. i feel so sorry for travis because he likes raina. i'm glad that trent and raina are happy together but i just want travis to be happy himself. i hope that in the sequel something happens between travis and raina.

i love this story.

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you did great!
pretitiful chapter 30 . 3/28/2008
poor travis
pretitiful chapter 29 . 3/28/2008
well. i think that they are together now. it's good to have the real and normal trent back. well. he isn't excatly normal but you know what i mean.

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still want travis and raina to get together but i can live with trent.
pretitiful chapter 28 . 3/28/2008
oh. i think is starting to like raina. actually sctratch that. i think someone DOES like raina and i think that someone is called travis. im so happy. i just wish that raina will feel the same way for travis. i am so glad that travis and raina are friends. i love it.

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pretitiful chapter 27 . 3/28/2008
i like the travis right now. "We’re friends now, aren’t we? Think of it as a gift.” i;ve been longing to hear that from travis. and i CANNOT believe that trent was behind them, watching everything. he must be heart-broken. because they hugged and all that. i feel so sorry for trent and it's all a big misunderstanding. i just want to give trent a big hug
pretitiful chapter 26 . 3/28/2008
oh poor raina. trent actually broke up with her? But he's usually the guy that forgives easily. i hope they talk over this and get together again because trent has misunderstood everything.
pretitiful chapter 25 . 3/28/2008
raina is in a rather sticky situation isn't she? trent talking to her about how he was afraid that she will like travis better than him when as matter of fact, travis was in the room.

i wonder what trent's reaction is.
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