Reviews for Right Here In My Arms FINISHED
Jay827 chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
UGH! her.. she... her personality. how she reacts ugh.

please tell me she becomes more understanding and less of a douche...
ShannonsScary chapter 32 . 6/24/2008
Awe poor Travis! I love your story!

I read it before (year or two ago) but it was unfinished then.

It popped back into my head a few days ago and

I am back reading it all night until the end.

I just started reading the sequel too. YAY! haha
Not Mary Jane chapter 32 . 6/24/2008
Oh god... I am like, freaking in love with this story.

Trent is so cute, not only cute, but extraordinary cute.

I've also read This Lullaby, but I think Trent is way cuter than Dexter,though Dexter is still one of my favorite fictional character.

I like how you make Trent mysterious in the beginning...

and making me think if there're intentions when Trent asked Raina to tutor him...

God... This story is so good..

Though I feel bad for Travis... He sounds hot... and one third of my heart really wanted him to be with Raina...

But ... whatever. I dunno what I am actually talking about since it's like... 1:23am in my city, and I just can click the red cross button on the right hand corner of the internet explorer and go to bed.

Haha, this story is surely addictive.

But I dunno if I can stand it if Travis really find another girl in the sequel... because in my mind, I always think he belonged to Raina... But actually, Raina and Trent are together...

Okay. I should stop rambling and get some sleep.

This is probably my longest review, ever. Sorry for any incorrect spelling or grammer, since I really need my bed now.

And to read the sequel hours later.
Sameisauce chapter 32 . 6/24/2008
I loved this story, I adore Travis so you better be good to him in the sequel.D
CrossMyHeart chapter 32 . 6/23/2008
aww! I loved it! even if it was sad... and i felt sorry for Travis...and matt...and come to think of it, i felt bad for the bird too. Being taught all those naughty naughty words.


euphoria-falls chapter 33 . 6/9/2008
um, wow.

Splutter chapter 13 . 5/31/2008
i can see your writing improving with every chapter.

well done!
kurskis chapter 17 . 5/18/2008
Trent is so cute!
the-galaxy chapter 2 . 5/17/2008
hmm.. well, one thing that wasn't very realistic was when he drank the perfume. Considering the amount of chemicals there are in scented products, just taking a small sip could either get you really sick or sent to the hospital to get your stomach pumped. And since Trent nearly "chugged" half of the bottle, he most likely would've died from it.
IljimaE chapter 29 . 4/28/2008
Hey! I was almost surprised on the big changes in the way of writing...I mean these past chaptersbecame more normal...

I hate it so much when the whole chapter goes like "I like puppies" and they argue ...

well i just really want to compliment how great the story became...

and it's so amusing how I can't guess who ends up to who...
ixxdbest chapter 21 . 4/27/2008
the story is really very very very boring that I don't like it but can't help stop reading cuz I hate to cut in the middle not knowing the ending...anyway is the author a filipino cuz the name of Trent's parents is exactly the name of a famous politician-actress that just coicidence?
coffee shoppe chapter 19 . 4/12/2008
Trent and Raina needss to stay together. I love them! I love your story too.
coffee shoppe chapter 15 . 4/12/2008
Whats funny is that MY History teacher is named Ms. Roberts.
luv rhima fan chapter 15 . 4/8/2008
heya i luv ur book so much that u hav 2 publish it and i also wanted 2 say dat dis is my second time readin it cause its got me so hooked dat i cant stop thinkin bout it and i swear i will sue u if u make tris and raina date in da second 1 cause i mean if i had meet trent i would so drool over him
pretitiful chapter 32 . 3/28/2008

i finished. and i must say great story. but i sort of wanted her to get with travis. but also with trent. it's just hard to make a choice because one of them will get hurt. and that is sad. i feel so sorry for travis because he likes raina. i'm glad that trent and raina are happy together but i just want travis to be happy himself. i hope that in the sequel something happens between travis and raina.

i love this story.


you did great!
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