Reviews for 8:53 PM, and the car is parked outside my window
cant-kill-heros chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
that a really amazing image really painfully real
lordelfy chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
wow...freaking wow..that was awesome..i dont know what else to say
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Its interesting how you describe the heart as red plastic; such a durable material yet it also shatters like everything else. You have a unique sense of voice throughout your work.

Much love,Juliet.
vcs chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
wow, great really feel the poem.
blackr0se64 chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I will admit, this isn't the typical poem, and gramatically it has a few errors. It doesn't do much for me, but I can see that you are really pouring your emotions into it, which is the most important part. With a bit of work and TLC (like capitalizing the I's) this could bloom into a beautifuly powerful piece of poetry.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
The style is different, and the poem is so tragically beautiful...