|Reviews for To the girl without a heart|
| lordelfy chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
good poem..i like this..i am not sure if i can relate..but i get the idea of it
| Taolei chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Beautifully written! The emotions and imagery are conveyed quite nicely. I loved these lines: "I am a girl without a heart./I have eyes that cannot cry tears,/lips that cannot sing songs,/hands that have forgotten how to touch./I want to soar, but I am afraid of heights./I am a girl without a heart." Gorgeous! :) Anyways, amazing poem, very well written. Continue writing!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Heartfelt- lips that cannot sing, I like that verse.
| Draven DarkCrow chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Awesome imagery! The words used to contain this feelings-were used beautifully.
| blackr0se64 chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
This was good. You had a lot of descriptive language and I could really feel the emotion that you poured into this. Keep it up.