*cries* I CAN TOTALLY RELATE! My best friend and I got into a huge fight, and he doesn't want to fix it...I don't even think it was a huge deal anyway...he got a girlfriend and dumped me...that's what I think! great poem!

Hmmm... pretty good. _ Very interesting, and good. It feels pretty hopeless in this poem...

Hmmm...very true. I like this poem. But you should keep in mind that a word ending in s like demands doesn't rhyme with understand. Write more, please.