Reviews for Alone
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
that's pretty! what is the structure of a sijo? I really like how you have darkness, light, and their child: the shadow.
dsanti.queza chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
it's a great poem/sijo! i love the way you did it. angsty, again, but your angst makes you a great poet.

-hugs-

syv
breakingtwilight chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
This is really good, despite what you may think of it. I can just picture someone standing alone like this.
Enigmatic Night chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
I like the imagery in this, very dark and teacher sounds nothing like mine, mine remembers every little thing he sets us... I liked your sijo, its darkly provocative.
amethystdawn chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Veddy mysterious my lovely sasha. Spooky visuals. Quite good actually. Haha, everyone in our class who's in ficpress should post sijos. Put our wasted creativity to work. Keep writing!

Happy new year! mwah! hugs!

-dawn
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
after reading the last line the whole poem has a certian feeling... like wind, they way it flows... if that makes sense.