|Reviews for Last Thing On My Mind|
| Right or Ryn chapter 9 . 9/22/2006
I still want to know what happened to the notebook. I think Jaiden took it.
You keep mentioning the pictures but I don't see where to get to them. Can you help me out?
| Right or Ryn chapter 3 . 9/22/2006
hm... never had frozen mango yogurt. wonder what its like.
| Right or Ryn chapter 2 . 9/22/2006
THis is so sad. I can't possibly imagine losing someone that close to me. My heart goes out to Kris.
| One Desire chapter 23 . 9/20/2006
GAH UPDATE! Thanks again for reviewing my story. ]
| One Desire chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
Thanks for reviewing my story. ]
Returning the favor. But oh man, that chapter was powerful. Good stuff, I can tell.
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE chapter 23 . 8/17/2006
before ur review...he didn't come camping...he hasn't talked to me for a month though i've tried to talk to him...he's "busy" but always on the net...hm...oh well...i've moved on and yeah-i hate him...i have been one of those people who hold grudges against people who lie...he told me all this stuff when he liked me and we were going out and i found out it was all fake...but i've moved on about 90%...lol
so...great chapter...sad...just watched a movie about abuse on lifetime...most predictable movie ever...anywho...ur story is so good...not predictible...can't wait to read more.
| pya chapter 23 . 7/26/2006
i really dont know what else i was going to say...hmm
yay for more lauren tho )
"I couldn't quite grasp the whole medical concept." hahaha.
i dont know. being abused wuld just seem too obvious...
what was lauren going ot say?
| Trmpetplaya1 chapter 23 . 7/17/2006
Okay, before I congratulate you on another well done (although horrendously short) chapter, I must comment: Does Jaiden's name (Ackles) have any relation with one very VERY fine actor, Jensen Ackles? It's just such an odd coincidence that I should become halfway obsessed (we college students are too cool and have too little time to get full-on obsessed XD) with said actor this past weekend, only to recognize a name similarity in your story. If not, just chalk it up to crazy coincidences. If so, damn. Jaiden must be one hot man if he looks anything like Jensen. Gotta love those Texas boys. That's where I'm from, and that's where I'm gonna go back to to find me a man. Georgia boys ain't got nothing on those from the Lone Star State. ::fans self::
Oh, and great chapter. Must find out more. Soon. Please? Awesome :)
| Trmpetplaya1 chapter 22 . 7/17/2006
Freakin cliffies...so glad I'm catching up and there's another chapter after this. Or else I would seriously have to harm someone. But no worries. Onto the next chapter! :)
| dyingofluv chapter 23 . 7/17/2006
Gasp! No! Another chapter..must...read...another...chapter... *faints* :]
| J.D Braff chapter 2 . 7/16/2006
okay, this is about my previous review about your latest chapter...
i dont know how i got it into my head that keifer sutherland was kris' dad...
i am so strange...(
but yeah, he just keeps popping up in my head now...ARGH!
yerz...sorry about the confusion!
| Fresh Harvest chapter 23 . 7/16/2006
Lol, I'm glad to be of service ;) This probably sounds weird, but I'm actually encouraged to review more in-depth because you reply to reviews.
Oh man :P Will we learn what he was going to show her eventually?
This chapter went by so quickly for me, haha. I just started reading and, suddenly, I was done. It seems like Jaiden is going to be okay, but then the "grim smile" part throws me off. Is there some kind of complication or something? Guess I'll have to wait and see :p
Lol, yeah... sorry about the Korean drama remark :P I think all Koreans will agree that almost all Korean dramas have the same plot (for example, either the girl or boy is rich, and the opposite is poor; someone has cancer; there's a car accident; someone saves someone by donating something or going in front of a car; memory loss; mean biological parents who aren't actually mean; basically, clichés galore). And yet, people still enjoy Korean dramas :P I have yet to watch one fully, but even I know the basic storyline of each one, haha ;)
But yours isn't quite like that. You take clichés, work with them, and make something really interesting :)
I've been told that I'm predictable, so I don't mind predictable events all that much. (But I want an adventure! I recently read The Princess Bride, the abridged version by William Goldman, since I couldn't find the unabridged, and it seems so... awesome and way out there. Man :p I love fairy tale settings. But I also like normal settings, because that means it's possible for everyone ))
:DI think this might be my first time meeting a Christian on FictionPress, and it's positively delightful. So hello ;)
And WOWZERS! Thank you for the dedication ) It makes me feel so special, haha. :D
Have a very lovely day :)
| J.D Braff chapter 23 . 7/16/2006
yay! (coz i've missed lauren)
and a massive NO! (about the bruise)
humz...i'd love to jump to conclusion about abuse and all that but you're good in not giving away too much...
for all i know, the bruise could've actually been from a softball and her secret is that she's jaiden's half-sister or something...
doubtful but the possibility is there!
and it makes for a highly enjoyable read.
oh, yeah, just as an aside, ever since i found out you cast keifer sutherland as kris' dad, i keep picturing him in my head which, is actually a good thing since that's what it's meant to do, but also irritating because i dont like keifer sutherland's mouth!
lol, yerz...but i still love him...just not his mouth...)
and good on ya for the onslaught of updates! yay!
| special chapter 23 . 7/16/2006
Umm..I'm pretty sure I'm not Allie from LJ. Lol..but I don't want to call myself a random Allie. So I am Allie, enraptured reader and faithful reviewer. Lol..haha..sometimes faithful reviewer.
Aww..she /is/ blaming herself. But at least Jaiden isn't dead or anything. Lol. Gawsh..that would suck.
But what I really wanna know right now..what's up with Lauren? I /know/ she didn't get hit in the face with a softball. Maybe she did, but that would probably be the least of her problems.
Fantabulous update! I Love your new story, also.
| Shorty Baby chapter 23 . 7/16/2006
I think we are missing something... I feel we are missing a piece of a puzzle maybe im just on crack...
Hope to seemore soon!