|Reviews for Eden of Space|
| shivathedestroyess chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
now tell me, who is this about?
| undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Aw, this is so sweet..You really made this real. I love it.
-freak from the corner
| WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
oh... wow... i really like this and i am so close to tears right now it's crazy! sorry i've been gone so long... grounded :( but i missed you so much and am really glad i get to read more of your writting that i am oh so in love with!
| Sweet Persephone chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Good song! Bravo, bravo! I like the sappiness. _ So, in the end what do you think of this quote?
"People love other people not for who they are, but for how they make them feel."
| Plinky chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Aww, tis beautiful! Really lovely.
Lovely imagery at the end of the first verse. I like the whole first verse actually.
"Eden of space" is a really nice idea.
"The way he makes me feel alive / The way he makes me feel like / I want a reason to survive" Lovely. Really flows well.
Beautiful. Keep writing! XD
| just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
i like this, its beautiful. i can imagine it being performed. i think the line 'to be me' is a little unnecessary in the chorus, it seems to flow beter without it. good work though :D
| Shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 12/28/2005