Reviews for For That One Guy Who Aimlessly Wanders the Hallway
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I love it when there's that tiny spark, that moment between one individual and another. Great work.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Such an interesting idea although the first bit seems a little detatched from the rest but the questions really worked so well. Like the slight random feel to this. Good job.
Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
interesting, i liked it
Cool-Ruzz chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
this was a real pretty poem. Quite different from all I have ever read. I loved the lines:-

I wanted to know why

The sky is so darned blue

And where the sunlight goes

After fading from the bowl of sky

So so so beautiful, your choice of words. You have quite a talent, and I'm flattered that I inspire you to write a story. I do hope you will someday. If you could pull off writing a great poem, surely, you could pull off writing a wonderful, wonderful story. Am I right? Think Twice When In Love is my first ever story, and I really thank you for your reviews. Oh yeah, chapter 10 is up, just thought I'll let you know. Keep writing! Love, coolruzz
blackcat13sady chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say "J-"? Very good, very good, very good! I love the way you write. Love is such an easy topic when you pick the certain someone who lights up your life. But like I would I know! Well, maybe... I'll stop! I won't waste review space musing about my love life! Love ya, Em! ~MerMer
poetrypal chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
This one is really good. Mysterious and cute.

Nice job!
AshGurl2897 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Ooh, I like it! :) Nicely written.