Reviews for Mascara
the0nion chapter 23 . 4/30/2017
Ahright, I guess Peter is redeemable given his traumatic past with his pops. I do love this story though. It's really well written. Awesome job and keep up the writing!
the0nion chapter 12 . 4/30/2017
I'm so confused about how I feel about this story. It's so hard because it's well written. I can really hear Peter's voice as a person, he's very real as a character, but I hate him as a character. He has no redeeming qualities. He's just an asshole, and a cowardly one at that. I can't seem to like him. At all. I absolutely hate him. He needs to get the shit beaten out of him so he can be a better person. Who leaves a 17 year old who had just gotten beaten the shit out of them just lying on the ground!? I just need an explanation for his assholiness.
renell.mallari.1995 chapter 23 . 3/26/2017
One of my favourites.
Can you guys help me where I can read his new stories? Thank you. New fan here.
Collins-A chapter 23 . 6/2/2016
Happy 10 Years to this story that will never get old to me, no matter how many times I read it!
closetyaoifan chapter 23 . 3/1/2016
This story is one of those that when I started reading it thought, "I think I've read this before" But after getting to chapter 3 I realized I must have only read the first 2 chapters. I'm glad I found it again! I don't know why but I think the chapter where he has a concussion is my favorite-actually I do know why. I'm really a fan of literary art and that chapter was artistic the way it was written but also really emotional and revealed a lot of truth about Peter that wasn't revealed until that point. And it may be a strong reason why I finished this story. I also was curious to see if it would be a happy or emo ending. So I know you wrote this 10 years ago but great job!
Prince of the Rising Sun chapter 19 . 11/3/2015
And what's with all the female names starting with a C?

Come ooooooon help this poor illiterate reader ooout
Prince of the Rising Sun chapter 18 . 11/3/2015
Hello! [It's me,]
Now this story is pretty damn old so I doubt anyone we'll be reading this which is why I didn't plan to post a review up until you mentioned the mohawk was symbolic too.

This story s pretty damn amazing and also brilliantly insightful and has me hooked on it the moment I started reading.
Now I'm lying in my deathbed at 5am because after a night of fitful sleep and waking up afuckload of times I finally said fuck it and decided that my preferred method of torture is reading your brilliant story anyway

Now that the intro is out! I have one massive question that has been chewing me since the first chapter
What does the mascara symbolizes? Someone pleeeeeaaaase tell me *falling to the floor in desperation* apparently a literature idiot and for the life of me can't figure out the biggest symbol of this story!
OliverMarco chapter 23 . 9/26/2015
I Love this story! I can't believe I finally read it! Wow.

Still, I have a question... Who bottoms ? Andy or Peter ?
Everfew chapter 14 . 6/23/2015
Oh gawd, that wash hilarious.
Everfew chapter 7 . 6/23/2015
I feel like Peter is just getting meaner and meaner.
Everfew chapter 6 . 6/23/2015
... and then Andy doesnt' show up, and Peter looks stupid. ;)
Everfew chapter 5 . 6/23/2015
Wow, he really isn't very nice, is he?
Everfew chapter 4 . 6/23/2015
Heheheh. That was so funny, how he dealt with Sam.
tyves986 chapter 23 . 5/10/2015
Peter and Andy were cute. Even though I am not sure they were meant to be. That's a story that can't be told to future adopted children, "Sit down kids, well I met your daddy at an orgy, I couldn't forget about him so I slept with my best friend, I couldn't forget about him even though I slept with the bf so I stalked him and was persistent till he caved into being with me".

Well my favorite parts are obviously Peter growing balls and pulling out the gun and sticking up for Andy and also when Peter goes on his spiral of angst that Andy doesn't like me and he really likes his best friend and I am just a replacement. Peter's reasoning is just hilarious, and usually I get sick of the angst bs and am like why the hell can't they just talk this out. Peter though is just to hilarious is spiral of pity.

Thanks for the story, well written and all that.
firefox vixen chapter 23 . 2/23/2015
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