Pammy...I am back! *hugz* and well all i can say is this...this poem was so freaking awesome and yet so sad, and i know what its like...wow, u have improved ur writing_ Wow...great woirk, but that last line at da bottom was just a little long, but hey we all make mistakes, lol_

was wondering who u were, lol, changing pen names on me there... lol. thanks for the review and sorry i lack in reviews, lol. in any case, nice to see u back and awesome poem!

this is sad but great job on this

this is so sad. i know how you feel too. you wrote this so well and it had such emotion in it. well done, i loved this.

I love this. It's so sad too... I would be devistated if my friend moved away. I love it, as usuall :o) though, this line "I've wanted to cry but everyone tells me you're coming back And until that happens I should relax" is a bit long against the rest of the poem. Any ways, I love it! KEEP IT UP PAMMY!

it kind of reminds me of a song in a well done, like an explanation instead of a complaint.

theres no good in goodbye.

Hey... thanks for the review. It is better I can see that, bt just one little thing... the line "I've wanted to cry but everyone tells me you're coming back And until that happens I should relax" maybe "And until that happens I should relax" should be on a new line. Yeah, it was just a little long for the poem. Apart from that... good work...I like it, I am still not sure if the rhyming was meant to go all the way through or if it was just one of those things that you write up and don't mean it to rhyme. Great work anyway!

...this is so moving! Keep up the good work! Loves, Tears

AWESOME JOB PAMSEY'S! LOL I LOVED THE FIRST PART...GOT A LITTLE CONFUSED ON THE SECOND BUT THEN THE THIRD TIED IT ALL TOGETHER...KUDO'S!

i like how you compared pictures to the real thing. i know how it feels to miss a person, but...it'll be okay in the end. things happen for a reason, and i'm sure this happened for a reason.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-