|Reviews for cosmic beauty|
| La Terraza chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
It's so easy to imagine her, I like it.
I like it a lot.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
wow,the descriptions are just breathtaking...and the rhythm is quite breathtaking too...(in a way that i think you have to read it quite fast to see the beauty of the words'pronunciations)..a very good job...
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
what is it about the stars that makes everything beautiful. i love this.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Enthralling. The imagery resonates of a wintery Goddess, her body and her soul. This poem is captivating (as well as gorgeous).
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Wow. I love these descriptions, just so original and unique. Lovely job.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
"flushed November on her skin" & "the galaxies in her eyes"
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Beautiful. "flushed November on her skin" is such a wonderful line.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
an ice queen. beautiful imagery~