Reviews for In A Battle of Bad Pick Up Lines
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Your summary is really eye catching, as your dialogue! Amazing job and thanks for an entertaining read!
Dominique Diane chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Pretty awesome story! I really like it!
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Awww! Cute. Love it
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
dats MY baby stry AWWWWWWWW
Fell4 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
That's cute
Don'tStopMeNow chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I really loved this. :) I like cheesy pick-up lines, but my friends and I like to recite the more inappropriate ones. XD

I kind of wish you would do something with Don haha, I kind of liked him. He kind of reminds me of Sid Vicious, since he's a frontman bassist too, and the name in some way :).
je-kay24 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Great laugh, absolutely loved the story. Flow and plot was really well done.
dreeming chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
ehehe cute
The Quotidian Life chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Nicely written. It's cute and fluffy. Sammy and Sarah are adorable.

Cheers,

The Quotidian Life
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This makes me inexplicably happy.
leavemeialone chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I really did enjoy this cute oneshot. I seriously don't know what I would do if someone said a really lame pick up line to me. These pick up lines were hilarious!
HayleeBailey chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Too cute! Made me smile like an idiot for about 30secs after i read it
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
That was pretty entertaining. You had some excellent pick-up lines in there. I'd heard a couple of them before, but not all of them, and it's always nice to learn new things. P
LaughsWithTears chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
ABSOLUTELY love this story. I have a whole array of insults that sound like pick up lines. Such as: "Where have you been all my life- and when are you going back?" :)
Charlee Rayne chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
hahaha! so funny.
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