Reviews for In A Battle of Bad Pick Up Lines |
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![]() ![]() aww this was very cuteee |
![]() ![]() Swwooooooons. My heart is a puddle and my eyes have officially turned into heart shapes. You had me at the car fight between two ladies describing as Meow hiss hiss. So darn cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a cute Oneshot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your summary is really eye catching, as your dialogue! Amazing job and thanks for an entertaining read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty awesome story! I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Cute. Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() dats MY baby stry AWWWWWWWW |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this. :) I like cheesy pick-up lines, but my friends and I like to recite the more inappropriate ones. XD I kind of wish you would do something with Don haha, I kind of liked him. He kind of reminds me of Sid Vicious, since he's a frontman bassist too, and the name in some way :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great laugh, absolutely loved the story. Flow and plot was really well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ehehe cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely written. It's cute and fluffy. Sammy and Sarah are adorable. Cheers, The Quotidian Life |
![]() ![]() ![]() This makes me inexplicably happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really did enjoy this cute oneshot. I seriously don't know what I would do if someone said a really lame pick up line to me. These pick up lines were hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too cute! Made me smile like an idiot for about 30secs after i read it |