|Reviews for Frozen Rushing Motion|
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
this is so vividly described, i felt transported... i even coughed.
| writerforever chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
An interesting poem. It's written very well. Unique :).
| absolute0 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
nice. i've never been to Manhattan but this piece captures a particular moment of it.
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
I love the end. "Freeze the gray pipes will, this day or the next." Amazing.