Reviews for When Bad Habits Look Good
Jezsh chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
like the feeling of being trapped, but trapped almost by your own obsession with this persona...nicely worded, nice piece.
Arwen Starfire chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
really good rhythm, originality. I like that you didn't use any of the romantic cliches that usually show up in romance poetry. Catchy title, too.

p.s. thnx for reviewing my work!
Tikklz chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Completely amazing! Totally captured that feeling of being infatuated with someone. So well done!
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Oh so interesting, makes you just want to read on! Love your way with words.
Isis ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
I know just what you're talking about in this poem; you did a great job expressing it.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
-smile- you never fail to make me so fucking happy. you are wonderful, honestly. i loved this.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
I like the flow and the circular nature of this. It wraps up really well at the end because you have explained the details of the interaction so well. Images work well here and the theme is an excellent concept to explore.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
I like this.