Great poem. Nice job on expressing yourself.

~Twilight Starr~

As I said in the other review. This is my second favourite poem. Well, actually I just really liked the pun on the words. I suppose it could be said to be prose in a way too. Anyway, great work. Will look forward to seeing more of your work.

Like the pun on the words. Good work as usual

Initially, I was looking for a place to post Another comment about "suddenly, slowly" because I already had done so and fictionpress wont let me comment again, so i came upon to this poem.

and i was pleasantly dont waste words, you give them to their full potential. you give them meaning. and it's great job on that.

I want to comment once again on "Suddenly Slowly" which is, by far, the best story on fictionpress-albeit one of the shortest I have ever read even though it's not completed. you deserve more reviews, and i dont know if i had already said this, but the reason you dont is because most readers search for stories that have more than 20,0 words or so, so yours doesnt come up doing the 'search' for it. Anyway, I really hope you havent given up on this story because it has such potential, such beauty,it moves me deeply.

"He whispered making the room feel too small for such a huge moment. "

You have a way with words that is unparalleled on fictionpress.

You have created a complex world with developed characters-the kind who feel, who love, and who live. rightly, justly. characters who leave marks. on the readers. on their world. on fictionpress.

there's utter beauty in this story. a passion that is unparalled, below the surface. subtle and raw. earth-shattering and perfect.

everyday i log onto my email hoping for some kind of update from this story.

and one of these days, i hope to find myself not disappointed.

this story is perfect but incomplete. please try to complete it.

thank you,

naira : luv4britishbands : Neurotic I Swear

No...it makes real good sense. I really really really enjoy this poem!