|Reviews for Alone On My Rooftop|
| emizulu chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Aww...so sad. I really like the imagery, it forms a contrasting picture of where you wanted to be versus where you were.
| Idiot Pilot chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Very descriptive. I like how you compare and contrast being in NYC to being on an island.
| ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
This reminds me of my friends and me. We like to sit on the roof and watch the clouds and the sky...except we live in Idaho, so instead of hearing Times Square we hear a creek behind the house and instead of seeing the lights of the city, we see the lights of the stars. But I suppose both views are quite beautiful. Lovely poem!