Reviews for Tin Can Cafe
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
With every callous word... calloused

I like this a lot.. the train of thought is great.. i love how you expose the relationhip little by little while contrasting her now too... it's awesome and that ending is so sad, but powerful
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
oh i like this! its an interesting point of view. nice work!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
a whole lot of this seems forced, some of it is just not pleasant while other times it has this real life "down to Earth" feel that is reminiscent of a regular old day. I'd say this is pretty good.

* noelle