|Reviews for Milk Petal Stars|
| Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
This is so beautiful. I like it a lot! Beautiful, beautiful job.
Black and White Dreams
| Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Wow, nice expression of feelings and words you've got here. I can really relate to it This is really promising. Keep it up. Try checking out my works whenever you've got time.
| Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
wowthis is really deepyou have good diction
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
beautiful.. the colors part was especially amazing.. i like descriptions too and the ending.. awesome job
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
sad, but breath-taking. the imagery is so beautiful. keep on going!
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
That was soo incredibly beautiful and awe inspiring. Beautiful, beautiful piece.
| strummychick chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
lovely...you really are very good at poems
| Plinky chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Wow, that's gorgeous. Really really lovely.
Beautiful ending. Keep writing!
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
This has simply gorgeous imagery. Love it.
| Choke on this chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
so beautiful...love "surfing the dust drops" and last stanza
| frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
absolutely beautiful imagery, nice writing. i loved the first verse. wonderful work.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
"surfing the dust drops", is a wonderful line. This really jumps out with color and feeling. It flows to the point of overflowing which is excellent because the work almost doesn't contain all the images used. This is a really great poem, well written and bursting with so much well placed emotion.
| Searching4Truth chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Amazing poem. The imagery was so beautiful. I loved the dreamy emotion throughout. Excellent job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)
P.S. Thank you for your nice review!
| cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
simply beautiful...keep up the good work!
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
this was so beautiful, so incredible. each word practically fell out of heaven, it was all so perfect. honestly. amazing. i can't even pick cerain lines that i loved the most; it was all incredible.